Creative Criticism

Well i let the first person read my newly started blog. (besides ken of course) Will call him Bikeboy, he said that i should give more detail into the actual sexual act, that the readers wanna know what I'm feeling. Ken agreed so I'm gonna give it a shot.

 Quick background on Bikeboy. My friend the Analyzer went on a bike ride with him an almost died, i don't think he was ready by any means to really go "biking" i think he thought he was going on just a little bike ride. Turns out he had to crawl under a highway overpass to catch his breath an try not to throw up... hehehe love ya Analyzer

I'm trying to think back to a sexual experience i wanna write about to try this. Okay Got it.

Lets see this was about a month ago. I was looking at craigslist,when i saw a ad that got my attention. Walking around downtown sucking dick. Well i don't live very far from downtown, maybe five minutes. So since it was just a casual cock sucking i told him what i drove an that i would be downtown in just a few minutes. I left the house in a pair of gym shorts an a wife beater an drove downtown. My phone beeped an it was the guy he told me what street he was on an sent a picture. i was pleasantly surprised to see he was very good looking. He had blond hair, cut real short like military buzz cut blue eyes about 5ft10 toned like swimmers build. witch is not my normal type. But when your horny, an the guy looks like hes fresh from the army its hard to pass up. So i pulled up, an hes in a very snug white t-shirt an blue jeans and a pair of black boots. he gets in the car an says hi i said hi in return an he said can you drive down under the arch along the riverfront. i said sure an started to drive. It was only a few blocks away. As I'm driving he puts his hand on my knee an slides his hand up my shorts leg. I feel his finger tips slowly touching my balls, as they move up an wrap around the shaft of my cock that's already partly hard. I pull down right at the waters edge next to one of the huge bridge posts. ( Analyzer resting under the bridge is what made me think of this story) I put the car into park, an flip the lights off. He slides his hand out the leg of my shorts an reaches for the waist band , so i lean the seat part way back to give him better access. He slides my shorts down and wraps his hand around my now hard cock. Sliding his fingers up an down the shaft while his other hand rubs my sack. He then takes his hand to his mouth wetting it then slides his now lubed hand  up an down the shaft gliding over the head. He lowers he head slowly to my cock an i can feel his breath on my dick. Then his soft warm lips as they wrap around the head and slid down my shaft. He takes a few slow up and downs taking my cock down his throat and then running his tongue around the head. Just working my cock with his hard tongue an soft lips. Like a master of his trade he sucks an sucks bringing me closer an closer. After about 15 minutes he starts to pick up speed really working me over as my breathing starts to get heavier. I put my hand on the back of his head pushing my cock down his throat. His one hand still rubbing my nuts i could feel it building up. I tell him I'm getting close an hes sucks harder an faster now taking me deep in his throat. I feel my balls tighten in his hand as shot number one of  my load goes down his throat. He slides his mouth up to the head as stream two three an four explode into his mouth he hungerly sucks them down and milks out number five. He licks my dick clean not missing a bit. then turns an steps out the car. When he turns to say thank you an goodbye i see the huge wet spot in the front of his jeans. Not sure if it was pre cum or he blew his load. But it sure was great head.